Writing Effective Sales Messages

A sales letter is a document designed to generateThink about every possible benefit your reader may
sales. It is a distinctive type of persuasive letter. Itderive from your product or service. In many cases,
persuades the reader to place an order, to requestpeople will buy a product or service based on only one
additional information, or to lend support to the productof the benefits you list.Besides the benefit stated at
or service or cause being offered. For most sectorsthe letter's opening, you can bolster interest by adding
other than retail, a sales letter is the first and mosthigh-profile testimonials from associates or former
important way of reaching new customers. Theclients. Testimonials from happy customers are very
purpose in writing a sales message is to sell a product.useful for this purpose, as are quotes from established
It influences the reader to take a specific action bythird parties such as industry leaders or reputable
making an offer-not an announcement-to him. Salesspecialists. Opinions, figures and independent statistics
letter attempts to persuade readers to spend theirare also likely to reinforce your message. Ultimate
time and money on the value being offered. To sell,motivations are what people "really" want. The product
the sales letter must be specific, go to the rightor service is just a vehicle to providing these benefits
audience, appeal to the readers needs, and it must beso make sure your sales letter focuses on these
informative.Before writing the sales letter you need tomotivational factors.Establish credibilityYou need to
plan about the type of sale campaign that you willestablish credibility and be believable by the second
conduct. Whether you will send a letter only or will youparagraph. You must anticipate the reader's objections
include brochures, reply forms, special inserts, samples,and doubts and offer counter arguments. There are
response cards etc.? How do you plan to market theseveral ways of overcoming reader's doubts which
product or service? Through the Internet, direct mail,must be used with good judgment and should be
email, direct sales, print advertising, etc.? Do you needrelated with the main appeal of the letter. You can
other advertising or literature to support the salesprovide testimonials, money-back guarantees, trial
letter? Who is your competition? How are theyoffers, attractive warranties or free samples. Using too
marketing this product or service? What is yourmany points to establish credibility will not be effective.
advertising budget? Are your marketing hopesTo gain credibility for you and your request, present
realistic? Another important decision is to determine thejust one fact, strengthened, if necessary, by an opinion
specific purpose of your letter. Whether you wantor fact as a proof.Motivate actionIt's important to
your reader to call for a free video, presentation orremember that people are motivated to buy based on
demonstration? Or you want your reader to fill out antheir emotions and justify their purchase based on logic
order form? For these you need to know and analyzeonly after the sale. This means that each step in the
your audience and the purpose for writing. Try to formsales letter process must build on the reader's
a mental image of the typical buyer for the productemotions to a point where they are motivated to take
you wish to sell. Ask yourself:- Who is youraction. Encourage the reader to act by an easy and
prospective buyer?- What motivates a person to buyclear method of responding. Close with summarizing
this item?- What might the reader want to know aboutthe central selling point and clear instructions for an
this product?- What does the product or service doeasy action to be taken. To motivate, you can offer a
for the one who needs it?- What can the reader gaingift, limit the offer, guarantee satisfaction, or promise an
from buying it?- What is unique selling point of theincentive.End with an action: What result do you want
product or service?- Does your offer appeal to thefrom your letter? Are you looking to get a
reader?- Can you transform him from prospect toface-to-face appointment? Are you answering
buyer?A sales letter is one of the importantquestions raised at a previous meeting? Do you want
instruments of sales promotion. The principles ofto make your prospect better informed? Do you need
effective sales letter depends on your communicationto get a signed contract? You need to close your
skill and your ability to convince your reader to acceptletter by requesting a specific, quantifiable action. For
or act on your recommendations. You may beexample: "I will call you on Thursday, May 18 at 10 a.m.
promoting a product, a service or an idea; your salesto schedule meeting" or "Please return the enclosed
letter should catch the reader's attention, build interest,contract by Friday, April 21, or call me if you have any
and motivate him to buy the product or serviceother questions".WRITING A SALES LETTER:Like any
offered. A good sales letter should possess theother business letter, a sales letter has three parts -
following qualities:Emphasize good looksDesign yourintroduction, the body of the letter and the concluding
document for visual impact. Make it easy to navigateparagraph. Let us examine in detail how to draft these
so your reader reaches for it first-ahead of thethree components of a sales letter. The important thing
competition's. You can create professional-lookingin a sales letter is the sequence which is as
templates for your sales letter that use your companyfollowing:Introduction
logo, branding and colors.'You' AttitudeThe mostBody of the letter
effective word in a sales letter is "you". Never begin aConclusionIntroductionThe introductory paragraph of a
letter with "I" because chances are the reader won'tsales letter starts with an opening sentence which has
get to the second word. It all comes down to sellinga vital role to play. In many instances, the opening
benefits - your prospects are not interested in thesentence is the only sentence that is read, so it must
features of your products services, but in what howimmediately appeal to reader's interests. There are
your products or services can benefit them. Then itseveral ways of writing an opening sentence in a
must build a reader's trust. It should make generoussales letter, some of them are listed here with the
use of "you" and "your" - so it is clear the customer'sexamples:
needs come first, not your desire to sell something.UseA provocative question: What would the leaning
bulletsThe body of your letter should contain keytower fall for? The leaning tower of Pisa would only
points, shown by bullets. Use bullets because it makesbe put to shame by architectural splendor that
the letter easy to read. As the writer or seller, yououtshines its own like the new range of luxury
benefit by immediately pointing your reader in thebathroom accessories.
direction of the important points you want toWhat can you get these days for Rs. 15? Enjoy the
make.Keep your letter briefIt's rare that someone isfinest that life has to offer just for Rs. 15 every
going to read anything past the first page, so keepmonth!A striking information: We are the Number 1! We
your letter to one page. Staying at one page will alsoare the number 1 in revenue, customer base and
force you to be to the point, since a wordy letter is ancustomer satisfaction.A story or an anecdote: Mr. Bala
ineffective letter.Use statisticsUsing statistics showswent shopping with his saving with our VISA credit
that you understand the issues of their business, whilecard. What will you do with yours? Our credit card
demonstrating that your product or service can solveoffers 5% bonus savings on all purchases for first six
a problem. It also gives your prospect a reason tomonths.A significant fact: Hearing Loss - you may not
support your product or service within thebe aware of... Only about 25% of people who need
company.Show your prospect's needsYour saleshearing aid use them.Most people have a vocabulary
letter is a very brief sales proposal, so you need toof 2-3,000 words and even a scholar uses no more
show that you are thinking about your prospect'sthen 5-6,000 words in his daily life. But there are around
needs. You might be hesitant to put your best ideas in500,000 words in English language and you can use
your letter, fearing that your prospect will use them butmany of them to enrich your vocabulary by using our
not hire your company. That's a mistake. By putting'Vocabulary Builder'.Split opening: You know English, but
your ideas in your letter, you will make your prospectsare you quite fluent in it? It may sound incredible but
feel like they are getting something already, and thatclassrooms can't help you achieve fluency. No, they
they will benefit from your products or services. Morecan't. No! Nor can audio video sessions. Nor translation.
importantly, you will be demonstrating that you areBut 'Rapid English Fluency' can help you.A conditional
creative and have your client's best interests insequence: If home is where the most number of
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follow the four steps in your letter which are:- Catchparagraph in the body of the letter. This part of the
attentionsales letter can be used to expand the promise made
- Build interestin the headline or used to deliver a second major
- Establish credibilitybenefit of the product or service. A sub-headline can
- Motivate actionCatch attentionTo be effective, aalso be used as the second part, to answer a question
sales letter must catch reader's attention. Design yourposed in the headline. For example, Part 1 could say:
document for visual impact to catch the reader's"Want to learn Kannada in 30 days?" Part 2 could say:
attention by using graphics such as layout, colour"Well, here's how to . . ."In the body of the sales letter
scheme or illustrations. You can grab attention with anyou will begin to offer proof. You expand the theme, fill
eye-catching headline or an interesting opening. Thisin details, offer proof, and show how you plan to fulfill
might be a question or statement. The opening shouldthe promise you made in the headline. Here, you give
be short, honest, relevant, interesting and stimulating.details of your unique selling point. You continue talking
Keep it quite general to appeal to as many people asabout the benefits and offer proof of the claim you
possible. There are many possibilities for opening yourmade early. You share the details of the benefits.
sales letter that could persuade the reader to buy.Prove your claim or statements by facts, logic or
Make a compelling promise for the reader, tell a storytestimony. There are several ways of doing so,
that the reader can identify with, make anchoose one that suits your products best. Following
announcement of a new product or serviceare some examples:Trial offers: Get on the fitness trail!
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their interest and ensure they read the next sentenceGuarantee of satisfactionYou always come first with
and each subsequent one.Build interestBesides aus and your complete satisfaction is our prime concern.
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product or service you are selling you need to positioncommunicate with people all over the planet and gave
it so that its benefits provide one or more of theme access to information all around the world."You
following common desires:- To make or save moneyneed to explain the qualities of your product and its
- To be healthyspecial features and convince your reader that your
- To be popular or to maintain a social statusclaims are true. Remember, by the end of the body,
- To have securitythe goal is to create an emotional response that will
- To have free time or save labourcause the reader to do what you are now going to tell
- To get entertainment, comfort or amusementhim to do.Closing:In the closing part of your sales letter
- To take advantage of opportunitiesyour goal is to motivate action. Recapitulate your
- To be good lookingpoints and make a final appeal. You may give a limited
- To achieve inner peaceShow them how yourtime offer, or limited quantity offer or special bargain
product will benefit them in making their lives better,etc. Use a Post Script. For example, "If you order
safer or easier. How will it save them time, trouble,before March 1, we will include a free . . ." Or "Money
worry or money? Look at their ultimate goal and relateback guaranteed . . ." Or "Discount is good until . . ." If
it to that. Why should they buy from you?you ask the reader to order, support, or to contact you
For example, state what makes you an expert infor the specified reason you must make it easy for
your chosen field. How can you prove what you arehim to reply. Support the sales letter with a post card
claiming is true? Once you have listed down the keyor an order form. If appropriate, supply a toll free
benefits of the service or product and positionedtelephone number, an Email link, and or your URL.
yourself as the person to deliver it, the time is right toAlways close with a thank you and use a signature at
deliver your sales pitch. Persuade your reader to buythe end of the letter. Save one of the best points for
based on the grounds of what the product or servicelast.Anubha Singh is Professor of English Language
does for him or her (benefit), not what the product orand Communication at Alliance Business Academy,
service is (feature)!A benefit is what the product orBangalore, India. Her main research interests include a
service does, and what the buyer gains from thevariety of linguistic theories in the areas of language
feature. A benefit is the specific outcome of thevariation and change, phonetics, sociolinguistics, as well
feature. A feature is something the product or serviceas applications areas in corporate communication,
already has. Benefits are what motivate people to buy.marketing communication and human resources.
Bullet point each benefit to make it easier to read.